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Koffie
tan , swirl
buzzing, talking, laughing,
creams, syrups, agitates, ice
Freezing, blending,
wet,translucent,
water
Sunday Scribblings, Thursday, Sept. 11,2008
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  1. September 12, 2008 at 5:27 pm

    >A very lively description there. I liked it.

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  2. September 12, 2008 at 10:30 pm

    >I love it! Summed it up perfectly.

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  3. September 12, 2008 at 10:53 pm

    >That’s the way my iced coffee ends up – bits of ice then water. Is that what you intended? I like the visual shaping of this verse.

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  4. September 12, 2008 at 11:48 pm

    >Hmm yummy! I can feel the froth coming up 🙂

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  5. September 13, 2008 at 12:00 am

    >Hi Lela,Well, there’s me Rose and Dewy Knickers and Bawdy Wench are alter egos of me. I’m a multiple personality within Brian who is a man and there are a total of six personalities including him and four other males. I’m the only female so I provide the common sense and intelligence. ;)Rosexo

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  6. September 13, 2008 at 1:22 am

    >i tried reading it backwards. and its still a great poem!

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  7. September 13, 2008 at 1:29 am

    >Thank-you most kindly for your words! I love what you've done with the spelling and multiple adjectives for the scribbling! Very creative and very fun! both your comment and your poem has brought a smile to the end of my (ugh) working day. peace, life & love!Namaste.

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  8. September 13, 2008 at 8:59 am

    >Vivid adjectives! And I love it when the written word makes a pleasing design on a page.

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  9. September 13, 2008 at 5:13 pm

    >Is this a diamante? Seems like I’ve seen this form before.Excellent job!

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  10. September 14, 2008 at 2:02 am

    >Sounds good to me! Nice poetry…

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  11. September 14, 2008 at 2:12 pm

    >definitely talking 🙂

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  12. September 17, 2008 at 9:18 pm

    >What is this form? It’s on the tip of my tongue… it’s a wonderful description. 🙂

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