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Still Raw

It really doesn’t matter,

Doubted anyone would dare?

Everyone would arm and scatter,

Too much noise, oh, with just a scare.

 

All the earth, friends did tear,

Finances went like a mad hatter.

You destroyed totally without a care.

Faith in your law, totally shatter.

 

Thought it did not matter,

Curses apparent, venally in your stare,

 Your ideals a mainstream, a tatter!

Huge penalties you will tare.

 

Full of venalities, your countries affairs,

Hands and feet, blood, you spatter.

Millions and millions, we are you should be aware,

Today! Spilling, bleeding, of the innocent in the latter.

 

Conning, the lines with idol natter.

Relations we no longer want to repair,

Of course, finally we will hear the chatter.

Niavely, patronizing unknown your own laissez faire.

 

Commodity sheik’s yoyo wars from sedan chairs,

To and fro, country by country, you murder your own mater,

Children visit your hospitals run like a concessionaire.

Should you continue, pollute particulate energy, ceasing patter.

 

With your venal, we will always know from your ratter.

The earth, we must all learn to share!

Long ago you conquered and blended into mongol tatar.

Looking at the earth it appears to fall into your snare.

 

Worn, warred, attacked, victorious, walking on air,

Walking on water is what we do, like antimatter.

When we see the camel’s hair, out come the flying mare!

Seeing stars, do not look at the arrears, next batter?

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  1. September 13, 2012 at 2:47 am

    dang hti sis tight…really love the rhythm and rhyme scheme of it…it picks up momentum for me as it goes…my fav stanza…

    Commodity sheik’s yoyo wars from sedan chairs,

    To and fro, country by country, you murder your own mater,

    Children visit your hospitals run like a concessionaire.

    Should you continue, pollute particulate energy, ceasing patter

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  2. September 13, 2012 at 7:04 am

    Striking comments on the status of our country!!

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  3. September 13, 2012 at 5:08 pm

    The only people who truly win in war are the money men. The arms dealers who sell weapons to both sides and don’t care who they are.
    I feel your anger in this, despair for humanity, and compassion for those affected, contempt for those who wage it.
    Very passionate and, honest write.

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  4. September 13, 2012 at 5:51 pm

    A strong statement piece, and aptly titled.

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