Scars and Ashes
As psyches sigh,
A brain drowns,
No real battles,
A few sounds,
Just the rattles,
Heart pounds.
Stomach pang.
Opposite high,
Retains crown.
Maybe a bang?
Deceptive cues,
Personae alter,
‘Pollyanna’ hues,
Stoic, comes falter.
Others sang.
‘Honeymoons Over,’
Mendacious priest,
Two faces hover,
Drowned at very least!
Voices clang!
Convenient for rover,
Off dearheart runs
As for her sober,
The brunt of their puns.
Struggling with pang.
Voices, with prayer says,
Disappointment, in tears,
New meaning ‘jabez’.
No anger, victim or sears.
In past hearts sprang.
Leaving this life ‘a muse’.
Just me so it may appear
No one to accuse.
his life back into arrear.
She is one big prang!
Heart game, a curiosity,
Naïvely, last to perceive.
A genetic paucity,
Mind and heart, reave.
Always connect to yang.
Paucity until death
His love, unconsciousness
Hers like ‘Macbeth’
A pawn for their chess!
no longer hearing, bell rang.
Silence, praying for an egress
So many, their victims and voices,
A childlike, retreat and regress.
Knowing, limits their choices
of Him, will boomerang!
Siring unaffected simplicity,
fleeing out from asunder.
detangling the complexity.
avoiding the thunder.
into motion thy sprang.
She told him too much,
he knew just what to say
put them under your feet
day after day, like a play
no grass growing under his feet
shaking the dust off her shoes
she is a very good muse
phoenix rising from sand
his mind became obtuse
generous and patient
he waited and waited
finally with strength
doing what she despised
travelling great length
removing his hand
he did not realize she has
left the encampments
taking his words to heart
far enough for scars to heal
turning ashes to cement.
no one’s muse and you
should watch your intent!
Not so naïvely waiting?
That is very good, and the short lines move it along and as they get longer the pace becomes emotive. Well done!
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ha. nice rhyme scheme and rhythm…kinda offbeat…intriguing story telling as well…i had to look up prang…i will tuck that one away for later…smiles..
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Interesting rhythm and imagery in your poem!
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you had me with the drowning brain… could be the story of many people..painter…writer… often difficult relationships…ha…maybe i’m so off…that’s where it took me..
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I enjoyed the complexity and the message of this poem.
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I agree with Shanyns–the emotion builds as the pace increases and it works well–very nice.
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A surprise in every line…kinda like Cracker Jax!
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Intriguing story , interesting write.
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