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Never Was A Secret

glance a picture
silver mousse hair
smooth handsome
profile truth
voice, heart melts
meeting, hearts rapid
music, emotions svelte
exciting, adoring
secrets forever told
love, choosing
same losses, pain
tearful injury, cowards escape
knowing pain leaves lack
reality, words fumble
under head injury
old trick from old goat
annuls, with voluntary comatose
hurts, everlasting scrape

  1. December 6, 2013 at 12:00 am

    in the first part…the seeing of pictures…they always take me back…working with a head injury can not be easy…i had another blogger that i travelled with for a time that had one and learned much of the difficulty then…


  2. December 6, 2013 at 12:42 am

    How sad for words to fumble under head injury ~

    If you are linking to D’verse, the post must be in exactly 55 words, no more or less ~


  3. December 6, 2013 at 1:26 am

    The pain in this poem is palpable!


  4. December 6, 2013 at 1:48 am

    Some secrets you wish would have stayed a secret. Interesting solution in this.


  5. December 6, 2013 at 5:08 am

    …I think I’d prefer to read this poem backward and end happily!


  6. December 6, 2013 at 8:07 am

    I have a feeling of 55 words of shady grey here.. Ouch very nice


  7. December 6, 2013 at 3:45 pm

    Starts off with a pic of an endearing person but sadly what can a head injury lead to. Nicely Sharon!



  8. December 6, 2013 at 3:52 pm

    ouch… that is painful… and def. not an easy path


  9. December 7, 2013 at 7:48 am

    So much feeling in this, so much pain and frustration.


  10. December 8, 2013 at 4:54 am

    What a painful progression, as from sunlight into darkness, captured in the Polaroid of 55 words.


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