What?
All vain
All insane
Meaning inane
Useless pain
All vain
All insane
Incompetent
Or
Intelligent
It does matter
Or
Of course,
Maybe not.
tener cojones
I need cajole
Bust or not
Cussed
Or cursed
Unknown.
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what encouragement do you need?
wont claim to understand it as much as i feel it.
smiles.
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ps good to see you, its been a while
smiles.
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ha…nice play with words and allit here sharon
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I like the short lines, the spacing for extra breath. Nice use of contradiction. The doubt and unsure footing of the voice is palpable. Very honest words; no BS. I love to visit seasides. The sea brings back focus. COuldn’t live on one full time though. Too many tides. I get that. This piece was liked pulled back and forth. The word OR used a lot. Effective to convey confliction. The only line I question is that pain is useless. But its probably personal preference. Excellente write. I enjoyed the passion and truth of its expression. Thanks for visiting my site and reading my lil poemish verse. Look forward to more of your work.
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There is a feeling of push and pull in this…a back and forth in the mind. A nicely paired down write.
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Meaning inane
Useless pain
Great line. Nice write.
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..to be or not to be?? kind of like there are two sides to every coin;)nice..
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pretty cool. I like the writing down the page aspect here, the spacing between the sets, the overt rhythm works really well, and nice insertion of the spanish. Nicely done. Thanks
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